better, i think.still feel the ornaments on the far left are too heavy.they distract from the typography and from the drawing.don't think you should get rid of them altogether, but perhaps make them less of a presence.g.
I agree with G and really like the drawing better in white....think that the typography near the drawing should follow the hair line...or have the hair follow the typography....either way....I really like this peice!!Robin
better, i think.
ReplyDeletestill feel the ornaments on the far left are too heavy.
they distract from the typography and from the drawing.
don't think you should get rid of them altogether, but perhaps make them less of a presence.
g.
I agree with G and really like the drawing better in white....think that the typography near the drawing should follow the hair line...or have the hair follow the typography....either way....I really like this peice!!
ReplyDeleteRobin